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Why I choose to attend college
With the development of the society, more and more students gradated high school engage in the entrance college examination and attend college. Why do so many students choose to attend college? For me, there are three reasons as follows. First, my parents always expect me to be a college student. They told me that you should study hard and attend college when I was a young girl. I do not live up to my parents so I engage in the entrance college examination and attend college. Second, in the society filled with fierce competition, the more knowledge and skills you get, the easier you get a good job. I enter college to further study for adapt to this situation. Last, I like English so much that I keen to get more knowledge about it.
Now, I am a junior. After three yeas studying in college, I think my decision of attending college is right. It is worth study and live in college for four years. In college, I learn not only knowledge and skills, but also cooperation, self-confidence and how to live without parents in far from home place. I believe that time I spent in college is worthy of remembering forever and the experience of study and live in college benefits me in my all life.
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