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Computer Network 关于网络利弊
Computer network has been playing an increasing important role in our day-to-day life.It has provided us a lot of benifits, but it also can creat some serious problems as well.
Computer network has enabled us to do a lot of things more easily and quickly.For instance,we can communicate freely by electronic mails with people from all over the world.What's more,an enormous amount of information can be accessible through the internet.
However,if not managed properly,computer network can create many problems too.Some students often exhaust themselves by surfing internet for days on end,which makes them neglect their studies. Furthermore,some unhealthy information may corrupt the young.
In spite of these,the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.So we shouldn't steer away from it because of its neglect effects. What we should do is to discard the dress and select the essential。

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丁晓钟组别:论坛元老性别: 生日:1900-1-1 来自: 积分:30692 帖子:29672 注册: 2004-02-14	2004-06-14 12:34 \| 树型\| 收藏\| 小中大 2 It has provided us a lot of benifits, / provide sb. with sth. 四六级、考研超精解和外刊超精读继续升级，保持领先~玩味尘世，静坐苍穹。

unique 组别:新手上路性别: 生日:1900-1-1 来自: 积分:1040 帖子:155 注册: 2004-05-06	2004-06-14 14:29 \| 树型\| 收藏\| 小中大 3 not bad ,come on!very good !thank you for you sharing ![em03][em05]

zhycfb 组别:新手上路性别: 生日:1900-1-1 来自: 积分:305 帖子:33 注册: 2004-06-05	2004-06-14 15:43 \| 树型\| 收藏\| 小中大 4 [em06][em06][em06]

quitebaf 组别:新手上路性别: 生日:1900-1-1 来自: 积分:875 帖子:80 注册: 2004-06-07	2004-06-14 17:27 \| 树型\| 收藏\| 小中大 5 [em03]

happymouse 组别:新手上路性别: 生日:1900-1-1 来自: 积分:235 帖子:10 注册: 2004-06-14	2004-06-14 18:08 \| 只看楼主树型\| 收藏\| 小中大 6 *以下是引用丁晓钟在2004-6-14 12:34:26的发言：* It has provided us a lot of benifits, / provide sb. with sth. [em03]谢谢丁老师！这次四级过了就请您吃饭~呵呵 [em02][em02][em26][em26][em26][em26]

happymouse 组别:新手上路性别: 生日:1900-1-1 来自: 积分:235 帖子:10 注册: 2004-06-14	2004-06-14 18:11 \| 只看楼主树型\| 收藏\| 小中大 7 *以下是引用unique在2004-6-14 14:29:09的发言：* not bad ,come on!very good !thank you for you sharing ![em03][em05] 承蒙夸奖！~呵呵 by the way,"thank you for you sharing!"should be "thank you for youR sharing!~" 要细心，考试千万不可马虎！~ [em01][em01]

Aaron 组别:新手上路性别: 生日:1900-1-1 来自: 积分:17995 帖子:2217 注册: 2004-02-21	2004-06-14 18:33 \| 树型\| 收藏\| 小中大 8 关于这种advantage & disadvan...的作文，个人认为可以从正反两个方面来写，也就是楼主的这种模式：提出观点；先写好处，再写坏处，最后发表自己的看法。总得来说，这种摸板有助老师看清楚你的写作思路。

happymouse 组别:新手上路性别: 生日:1900-1-1 来自: 积分:235 帖子:10 注册: 2004-06-14	2004-06-14 19:57 \| 只看楼主树型\| 收藏\| 小中大 9 楼上所言甚是！

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