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2004年1月作文
Reduce Waste On Campus
In our daily life, we often come across waste phenomenon on campus. With the development of national economy and progress of science, this phenomenon becomes more and more prevalent. It comes as no surprise that our campus is full of phenomenon.
The disadvantages of waste phenomenon are obvious. The reasons can be list as follows. In the first place, waste phenomenon is incompatible with traditional characters. As we know, the thrifty is our national virtue. In the next place ,it can cause negative impacts on their personal development. It doses harm to cultivate our minds.
It’s urgent for us to do something about this. We should take immediate action to reduce waste on campus .As to myself; I should eliminate the waste phenomenon in my daily life. For instance, paper and ball-pens should be run out before they are tossed. Let’s cherish the virtue of thrifty and call against waste.
2000 年 6月
Is a text of spoken English Necessary?
With regard to the question, different people have answers. Some think that a test of spoken English is of vital importance. It is due to several factors. To begin with, spoken English play a key role in learning English. To the second place, English is use for communication, we hardly image a person who is poor in spoken English can make full use of this language.
Nevertheless, there are some people who disagree with the view. They assume it is unnecessary for us to hold test of spoken English. They allege that there have many barriers in the test of spoken English.
To my mind, I prefer the former. With the graduation of a large number of college students, competition for jobs becomes more and more fierce. One way to gain some advantages over others is to master spoken English. A text of spoken English is a way of measurement.
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