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请在线的老师帮我改一下作文,谢谢

请在线的老师帮我改一下作文,谢谢

请高手帮我批改一下,可以的话帮我打个分,万分感谢!!


  Positive and negative effects of Internet


Nowadays, Internet is not a fresh object any more .it has already permeated every aspect of people's common life. Using the tool, people can capture a variety of latest news, search any information they need, and make friends all over the world as well, which cannot come true until the Internet shows up.


But, owning to its open, the Internet also provides unhealthy, harmful things, such as obscene picture or violence scenes, to every person, especially young students. Meanwhile, IF young teenagers’ behaviors are not restrained, they will easily indulge themselves into the Internet game, eventually having a negative influence on their study, even their future.


In my eyes, though the Internet is an unperfected product, we should not deny using it. What we should do is to use it correctly and reasonably.

 

不好意思,不知道要发到作文教室
 
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