回复：创造闪光点，作文亮一点！
A letter to Mr. Ding
It’s my pleasure to write to you. At the beginning of this letter, thank you for revising my article. I am envious of your fluent English. However, I almost can not speak English or can not understand the English speakers at all. So I always gained few scores in my English listening tests. Could you give me any suggestions?
The course which is taught by you is very helpful to my writing. I will study English harder, and I hope I can pass the CET-4 which is host in this December. I found your two ships of the pen –Teacher’s Day and unitize. They should be written as Teachers’ Day and utilize.
I met unexpectedly with Mr. Chen who was my English language teacher last year. We talked some about writing. He told me some expressions, such as in my personal level which were learned from your courses, are Chinese English. He also said landing a job used to express seeking for a job was not a good expression. Currently, I am puzzled. Can you give me some help?
My mailbox is
wanglj1122@sina.com. You can send me an Email or leave your comments in my writing area. I will be online on Wednesday. I am hoping to see your words.
Best wishes!
Yours，
WangLijuan
