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Advantages and Disanvantages of the Internet
Nowadays,the Internet has integrated into our daily life. More and more people voice growing concern over the Internet. However, people still divided on this point.
Some people who in favor of the Internet maintain that the Internet has many advantages. At first place , we can search the information conventally and quickly via the Internet in this information era. Moreover, we can contact the friends and business partners on the Internet. It makes the world become ever-smaller. Last but not least, the cost has decreased dramatically and everyone can afford the fees of the Internet.
Another people ,however, oppose to the Internet hold that the Internet will bring some unfavorable consequences. On the one hand, students who lack of self-control will be indulge in the Internet game, online chatting. On the oher hand ,the information on the net full of the violence ,racials and the erotic which will impose the negative effects to the immature students.
Weighing the pros and cons of the Internet, we can naturelly arrive at the conclusion that the Internet will make our life brighter if we can make good use of it.
