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老师们救救我啊,帮我批一下吧,顺便帮我估估分,谢谢谢谢谢谢(一万个)

老师们救救我啊,帮我批一下吧,顺便帮我估估分,谢谢谢谢谢谢(一万个)

Dear Sirp>


I’m writing to you in order to discuss about “How to learn English well.”


Firstly I think it is very good for all walks of life to study English. Since English is being used as the most extensive language in the world, the importance of learning it is easy to see.


Our country, schools, publish industries and we everyone as well should devote to it. As to country and schools, it is important to encourage everyone to learn it. As to publish industries, they are obliged to publish high quality English books for us.


As far as I am concerned, to improve the skill of daily spoken English, reading and practical writing is the most important. Our goal to learn English is to grasp it and use it so as to communicate with foreigners. Consequently, we should learn to say, listen and write it, not just to join the examination and get a high mark.


So much for my opinion.


                        Your sincerely


                          Li Ming

 

Dear Sir:

I’m writing to you in order to discuss about “How to learn English well.”(I am writing to discuss......)

Firstly I think it is very good for all walks of life to study English(learn). Since English is being used as the most extensive language in the world,( English is the most widely used ...) the importance of learning it is easy to see( is self-evident)

Our country, schools, publish industries??? and we everyone as well?(all of us?) should devote to it. As to country and schools, it is important to encourage everyone to learn it. As to publish industries, they are obliged to publish high quality English books for us.

As far as I am concerned, to improve the skill of daily spoken English, reading and practical writing is the most important. Our goal to learn English is to grasp it and use it so as to communicate with foreigners. Consequently, we should learn to say, listen and write it, not just to join the examination and get a high mark.

So much for my opinion.

                        Your sincerely

                          Li Ming

6-7分

四六级、考研超精解和外刊超精读继续升级,保持领先~玩味尘世,静坐苍穹。
 

只能在最后一段看出你在讨论如何提高英语能力,但是还有许多的错误,前面的内容很罗嗦而且和主题并无太大的联系

同意丁的分数

 
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