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又来麻烦老师了,谢谢,拜托修改一下,^_^。

又来麻烦老师了,谢谢,拜托修改一下,^_^。

1,目前有些校园内浪费现象严重;
2,浪费的危害;
3,从我做起,杜绝浪费。



  At present,serious phenomenon of waste increasingly appears on campus. For instance, used books and magazines,which still work, can be found in every corner of dome. Food students left in canteen is put into dust can. It's such good living condition which their parents offer that students paralyse.
  What's more, we are supposed to see the deeper level than the surface of waste phenomenon. This problem may give rise to a variety of problems. First, there are a great deal of youngsters who are not able to go to college, even though they have strongly desire to absorb knowledge. Second, we can't affort to abuse limited resourses which aren't gotten from anywhere else. We are borrowing resourses from our descendent.Third ,this a fatal habit which influence our descendent to simulate.
  In brief, if we ignore this problem, the phenomen are getting worse. Obviously,we have to find approach to dealing with it in no time. The first key factor to solve the problem is that government needs to take responsibility to set up laws and regulations in order to purnish people who have the guilt of waste. The second one is that the general awareness of importance of waste phenomenon has to be evoked, and people get rid of wasting havit by trying to avoid waste intentionally and making full use of resourses. For instance like, eating up bought food, donating used clothes and books to The Hope Project.

 

dome? / dormitory, dorm

purnish people ? / punish

For instance like, eating up bought food, donating used clothes and books to The Hope Project. ??? /

Project Hope.

小错误比较多。

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关于浪费的危害没有写好,另外太多的语言错误,使阅读困难,7分下
 
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