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Where to live- in the city or the country?
There are two ways to live in the world. One is to live in the city, another is to live in the country. Different people have different ideas of these two ways. Which one is the better, it is not easy to say, for they have both advantages and disadvantages.
Nowadays, cities have become a center of economy, politics. More and more people get into the city for jobs. Cities have its convenience for people. The can buy almost anything they want to buy, and they can get excellent education as they grow up, they can get good jobs.
The attractions of the country is also large. Since the atmosphere is good. People live in the country can lead a longevous life. They can grow flowers, plant trees and raise animals. They can do almost everything, as there are not so many regulations as the cities have.
There are still a lot of advantages haven’t been mentioned. However, as everything has two sides, there are also many adverse factors. For instance, the environment in the city is not optimistic. And there is so much inconvenience in the country.
As far as I am concerned, to live in the city is my preference. After all, the city is the trend of the countries’ development.
[此贴子已经被作者于2004-5-8 21:14:34编辑过]
