丁老师：

    我上次给你传过一次作文，为什么没有了？？我再传一次，请你批阅一下！谢谢！

我的作文很差，希望丁老师多给我点意见。

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请您把作文帖发在专版，我替您转移一下。上次您发的作文应该是被转移了。

另外，把作文内容直接发出来，方便老师批阅。

How to Solve the Problem of Heavy Traffic
      In our country,an the number of population and  cars increasing,Heavy Tracffic is
becoming a important proble which should be solved immidiately.
      Here,someone have two solution to  deal with it.First,the country should lay down
more roads to reduce the crowd and accelerate the flow of traffic,but it takes more land.
Second,govenment can open uo more bus line.It will decrease the number of bike and car.But
it may be inconvenience for part of persons.
      In my opinion,the two solution are both good,but if we think over them together will
be better.NOt oly composite the advantages but alse lighten the defects.

[此贴子已经被作者于2004-5-10 21:34:17编辑过]

内容太简单,像高中生的作文,字数也不够,6分下

Do you have good luck number?Do you believe it will bring good luck to you?You may say no,but some people are sure that
certain number will bring them good luck.It is common in both the east and the weast."7" is a good luck in weastern country,
for God spent seven days creating the world,while "8" is a good number for chinese,because it pronounce as "fa".
On my personal level,number have no velation with luck.Fortune Number will do nothing good to you."No pains,no gains."if you
want to be successful,you should do you best to work.If you dependent on the lucky number,you will get nono,but those
so-called lucky number!

和上文一样的问题,另外,要求的第二个内容你并没有很好的扩充