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Advantages and Disadvantages of College Students Doing Part-Time Jobs
As a cllege studentin the modern society,we ought to take part in many social practical jobs such as part-time jobs,which can bring us massive social experience .by taking a part-time job,college may put their major knowledge into practice.This enhances their ability of practice and also increase their interest in own major.In addition,to some students who were born from poor families,taking patr-time jobs can ,in part,resolve the financial problem.Therefore,most people agree that clllege students should take a part-time job.
In the meantime ,there are a number of individuals who feel that taking part-time jobs is harmful to cllege students.If a student took a part-time job,he have to sacrifice much time for the part-time job,which would lead to poor performance.This is not worthwhile.
In my opinion,in order to be a qualified cllege ,we should take a part-time job and try to apply our knowledge in bllks to practice.but meanwhile,we must not disregard studies and should balance the both aspects,for job and study are both important to us.
(我是周六班上的学生能不能在课上讲解一下.谢谢!)
