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图为描述大学生毕业的流向,要描述内容并分析原因。


Several choice are availzble for college graduates.From the pie chart we can see only 49 percent students select work after graduate and an increased number ,one third of them go on with their study. A small numbers have other choice,with 12 percent studying abroad and 8 persent runing their own bussiness.


Why there are so great change from past?May the reasons can be list as follow.The first one is about 200 million high school students have changs enter university each year because expend-recruiting police.Therefore employment environment become more and more badly so a quite number of them choice studying in the future.bdsides,nowdays,undergraduate have more risking and passion than past thus they creat out their own bussiness independently.


No matter what we choice,we must study regularly and improve our intergrated capability then we will get a position in this competitive society.

 

没有图表看,但是从你的文章内容来看,第一段和第二段的衔接不好.从第二段的内容看似乎要你谈论变化的原因,但是这个变化你在第一段里面并没有体现出来

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