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我刚刚写了一篇作文,请老师帮忙修改一下,谢谢,各位朋友点评

我刚刚写了一篇作文,请老师帮忙修改一下,谢谢,各位朋友点评

1,很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试,理由是...
2,有些人持不同意见,
3,我得看法和打算。



  Recently,test of Spoken English has been paying attention by people in growing numbers.Some people hold such idea that it is necessary that test of Spoken English is supposed to be come off.From this perspective of them,a variety of reasons are strongly supported as follows;for one thing,the function of learning English is to practise as a tool and listening and speaking play vital roles in using of English.For another,since the number of foreign companys setting up in China,people with excellent oral english are undoubtly demanded.
  In contrast,as opposed to that idea,some others claim that test of Spoken English is dispensable.They believe that the manager who can decide whether people are hired won't examine your oral English.What's more,they think their good reading and writing could compensate for the disadvantage of Spoken English.
  Comparison between tow ideas,there is little doubt the latter is definitely wrong.As far as I'm concerning,acquirement of excellent expression of Spoken English will strengthen my confidence  and you can communicate with people speaking English from all over the world.Therefore,Spoken English is a leading portion in learning English and test of Spoken English is imperative under the situation.

 

内容和结构都不错,条理比较清晰,可以9分上

注意小地方的错误,大家可以来看看那些小地方出错了

 

请老师点评详细点,谢谢
 

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undoubtly demanded

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