麻烦帮我改一下,打个分,我就要参加专业四级的考试了，谢谢~
My View On Practising Thrift
With the rapid development of economy,we Chinese people are getting more an more wealth.Some people think it is not neccessary to be economical,while some people believe it is reasonable to practise thrift.As for me ,I am favor of the latter.
There is no denying that thrift plays an important role in our daily life.To start with,thrift as our traditional value,is one of the good habits that people have formed.Once get rid of it ,people may lose the merit tradition .Next ,people now are living in a more comfortable world,yet it mayalso to stick to live in a economic way,which will bring wu more wealth,In addition,the nunber of the world's enviroment is limited .That is to say,if we wast too much,there will little enviroment for us to use in the future.Tinally,thrift leads to a happy life for people ,while wast may errupt people 'mind.
F rom what has been disscussed above,we may saftly drow the condition that pravtise thrift is important in our life ,and it will be so in the future.
