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以下是引用TheYeti在2005-9-29 11:34:00的发言:

Why is the color on the posts changing by themselves? 第 139 楼 and 第 140 楼 were in black when I put them in. Yesterday when I look at them again, they were blue. Today, they are red.



Just now, I encountered the same instance as you said above! But, I dont recognize the cause either.
 

Very good!Thank you!This is a good idea!

 

22. Labour Shortage in Southern China

Labour shortage among 1.3 billion


Factory workers at centre of boom are voting with their feet (1) on poor wages and conditions by  DON MACDONALD The Gazette
October 5, 2005


(1) See: Collection of  Interesting words and phrases: 第 5 楼http://www.rainlane.com//dispbbs.asp?boardID=11&ID=6949  “Vote with your feet” submitted  by Duran” Leave a place or situation you don't like; show your disapproval by leaving.



A labour shortage in China? It seems impossible in a country with a population of 1.3 billion, including an estimated 150 million surplus workers in its impoverished rural areas.


But in the southern Guangdong and Fujian provinces - Ground Zero for China's economic boom over the last quarter century - factories are short about 2 million workers by a government estimate.


The Chinese economic miracle began here in the delta of the Pearl River near Hong Kong when former leader Deng Xiaoping oversaw the creation in 1980 of (2) special economic zones to encourage foreign investment and trade. (2) The phrase to learn is "oversaw _ _ _ of _ _ _"


The region would go on to develop the world's largest concentration of manufacturing capacity fuelled by a seemingly endless supply of cheap labour from the hinterlands.


But over the last year, labour shortages have begun to appear.


The phenomenon says a lot about the rising aspirations of the workers who created China's economic miracle…. (3) The phrase to learn is "created a miracle of..."; "created a/an _ _ _ miracle."


… Elsewhere in Guangdong, migrant workers are voting with their feet(4) on poor wages and terrible working conditions.  (4) See footnote 1 above.

Migrant factory workers are choosing other regions where pay and conditions are better or jobs are simply closer to home. These regions include the booming industrial zones in the Yangtze River delta and its hub, Shanghai, as well as other emerging manufacturing centres in the northeast and west.
The Yeti, from 雨巷英语园地 :  http:/yeti.rainlane.com
 

construction of sentence


1.The food suppied by our school's refectory is deteriorating, many students vote with their feet on its bad taste.


2.The level of citizens' lives is up the grade under the atmosphere of economic boom.


?.3.Does the "oversee" mean "predict"or"appoint" in the sentence of "Deng Xiaoping oversaw the creation in 1980 of (2) special economic zones to encourage foreign investment and trade."?


4.The cartoon says a lot about...=The cartoon enlightens us a lot that...


5.The emerging economic policy creat a miracle of marvellous economic boom.

 

1. use semi-colon instead of comma. (run-on sentence when comma is used.)


2.is upgraded


3.Oversee=to watch over and direct. (American Heritage Dictionary: To watch over and direct; supervise. See synonyms at supervise.)


You should alway try looking up the meaning of a word with an E to E dictionary. Try: http://www.onelook.com


5. has created (present continuous because the boom is still going on.)

The Yeti, from 雨巷英语园地 :  http:/yeti.rainlane.com
 

Oh, I just understand the meaning of the sentence of "Deng Xiaoping oversaw the creation in 1980 of (2) special economic zones to encourage foreign investment and trade." And I will imitate the struture to make a sentence/P>

The master oversaw the program at this afternoon of my grade for the coming semester evening.


The accountant checked the account book in the last night of the M.C.company to parpare the budget for next year.

 

23 Future Shock


The following are excerpts from the "Future Shock" by the futurist Alvin Toffler. This book that came out in 1970 took the world by a storm. It was hailed as the definitive work of the decade on what the future may bring. My wife read the book but I have never read it until now (I am still reading it--only a few pages at a time, and only on days when I am on the treadmill). Despite being 35 years old, much of what it says still holds true today. If you have the chance, you should pick up a copy from your library and read it.


  I picked a few paragraphs that have words and phrases relevant to the type of essays you have been writing or may have to write.


  As forewarned, I am increasing the number of paragraph in the new instalments of my "selected readings."


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  The following paragraphs are not in succession of one another.


Behind such prodigious economic facts lies that great, growling engine of change—technology. This is not to say that technology is the only source of change in a society. Social upheavals can be touched off by a change in the chemical composition of the atmosphere in climate, by changes in fertility, and many other factors. Yet technology is indisputably a major force behind the accelerative thrust.


To most people, the term technology conjures up images of (1) smoky steel mills or clanking machines. Perhaps the classic symbol of (2) technology is still the assembly line created by Henry Ford half a century ago and made into a potent social icon (3) by Charlie Chaplin in Modern Times.(4)


(1) Conjures up (an image)/images of : we have introduced that before. This is a useful phrase.  E.g. every time I think of you, I conjure up an image of charm and loveliness. The news of the flooding in Southern China conjures up an unpleasant image of death and destruction.


(2) Note:  "classic", not "classical" ( One of the frequent mistakes in Chinglish is the use of "classical" instead of "classic."


(3) Potent Social Icon: An Image/Figure/Representation of society that has a very powerful impact on us


(4) A famous Charlie Chaplin movie.



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Discovery. Application. Impact. Discovery. (5) We see here a chain reaction of change, a long, sharply rising curve of acceleration in human social development. This accelerative thrust has now reach a level at which (6) it can no longer, by any stretch of the imagination,(7) be regarded as “normal.” The normal institutions of industrial society can no longer contain it, and its impact is shaking up all our social institutions. Acceleration is one of the most important and least understood of all social forces.


(5) These are known as "one word" sentences. They are used for special literary effect.


(6) "At which", not "which." One of the problem area of student writing is the rampant misuse of "which" when, in many cases, it should be "at which", "in which", "from which"...(a preposition+which." Read: The Which Project: http://www.rainlane.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=11&ID=17926&page=1


(7) "by any stretch of the imagination"= no matter how far you can try reasoning it out, it won't work.  E.g. I cannot be, by any stretch of the imagination, considered as handsome. = I am not handsome no matter how you look at it.




This, however, is only half the story. For the speed up of a change is a psychological force as well. Although it has been totally ignored by psychology, the rising rate of change in the world around us disturbs our inner equilibrium, altering the very way in which we experience life. Acceleration without translates (8) into acceleration within.


  This can be illustrated, though in a highly over-simplified fashion, if we think of an individual life and a great channel through which experience flows. This flow of experience consists—or is conceived of consisting—of innumerable “situations.” Acceleration of change in the surrounding society drastically alters the flow of situations through this channel.


(8) "Translate" does not mean "translating from one language to another."  Translate is used to mean "becomes", "converted to", "yields", "give rise to"  E.g. Working smart, instead of working hard, often translates to success. Smart investment translates into money in the bank.



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The idea of using a product once or for a brief period and then replacing it, runs counter to the grain (9) of societies or individuals steeped in a heritage of(10) poverty. Not long ago Uriel Rone, a market researcher for the French advertising agency Publicis, told me: ”The French housewife is not used to disposable products. She likes to keep things, even old things, rather then throw them away. We represented one company that wanted to introduce a kind of plastic throwaway curtain. We did a marketing study for them and found the resistance too strong.” This resistance, however, is dying all over(11) the developed world.


(9) Another way of saying this is: "Runs against the grain." It means "runs opposite to what is consider as the normal way of things."


(10) This can be adapted to a lot of situations. E.g. Chinese are steeped in the tradition of filial piety.  China is steeped in the heritage of respect for the elderly. 


(11) Disposable products are also known as "throw-away" products, not "once s_e_x" product--just a joke. Some irresponsible person have been translating "use only for once" by software and ended up with "once s+e+x". This is showing up in many product packaging.



(12) This can also be adapted for many situations. E.g. the tradition for frugalness is dying all over China. The respect for public properties is dying all over the world. 


(Update: Corrected three mistakes. Thanks to the sharp eye of SDJ at Rainlane.)



[此贴子已经被作者于2005-10-17 0:34:00编辑过]

The Yeti, from 雨巷英语园地 :  http:/yeti.rainlane.com
 

Becides the excellent phrase and sentences' structure Uncle Yeti collected for us, I have done some selecting work as well.


1.prodigious=tremendous=marvellous


2.Behind such prodigious prosperous scenes lies that the great effort made by all laborers hand in hand.


3.Lihua, who conjures up a image of beauty and intelligence/smartness, is my intimate friend.


4.?thrust=great development/advancement


5.The desert in which it cannot find any resources, by any stretch of the imagination, will have no chance to become a prosperous city.


6.China has a tranditional society whose individuals steeped in the heritage of respect for the elderly.


The note is open to correct.Thank you for the time paid to these words.

 

A thrust is a push, as in push forward. E.g. After the collapsed of the German counteroffensive in the Ardennes in Dec 1944, the Americans accelerated their thrust into the heartland of Germany.


Or China's economic thrust may be thwarted by the lack of mineral and energy resources.


The desert in which it cannot find any resources, by any stretch of the imagination, will have no chance to become a prosperous city.--> The desert, in which one cannot find any resources, has, by any stretch of the imagine, no chance of becoming a prosperous city.


China has a tranditional society whose individuals steeped in the heritage of respect for the elderly.-->(1) China is a traditional...or (2) China has a people who are steeped in the....

The Yeti, from 雨巷英语园地 :  http:/yeti.rainlane.com
 

24. The Gender Gap

The following is selected from the article "The Gender Gap" written by Norman Webster of the Montreal Gazette. The article is of medium size. Since only subscribers can have access to the article, I cannot give you a link to read the article on their site. However, I have it typed into the Rainlane Community Lounge. If you have 15 to 20 minutes, and want to read the complete article, you can go to: http://www.rainlane.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=27&ID=18181&page=1


The Gender Gap (***Please note: this BBS still changes the word s_e_x to ***. I have made two open appeals to the administrator to remove that taboo, but no one listened.)


The skewed ratio of boys to girls in China and India willhave profound ramificaiton for the future of those countries.


Paragraph 7/EM>  Those couples lucky enough to have sons tended to spoil them unmercifully. These chubby youngsters were known as Little Emperors, and acted the part. China's one-child policy, still to come, would only swell their numbers.


Paragraph  8  Societies the world over have usually valued boys above girls. Males do the heavy work and provide for parents in their old age, while females are extra mouths to feed until they marry and move away, taking dowries with them....


Paragraph  10 Both are found in a disturbing book entitled Bare Branches: The Security Implications of Asia's Surplus Male Population (The MIT Press, Cambridge, Massachusetts). The authors - U.S. professor Valerie M. Hudson and British researcher Andrea M. den Boer - spotlight the increased skewing of s_e_x ratios ("unprecedented in human history") in the world's two largest populations, China's and India's.


Paragraph 11 Modern science is responsible.(1) New techniques such as ultrasound allow parents to learn the sex of their fetus, then to abort unwanted females fairly easily. (1) You can modify this in your essay to "technology is responsible", "nature is responsible", "we humans are responsible...."


Paragraph 12 The results are shocking. In 1999, the Chinese Academy of Social Sciences said the s_e_x ratio at birth in China had reached a maleemale ratio of 120:100. The academy calculated one in six Chinese men was unlikely to find a wife. India's ratio is also approaching 120:100, according to Hudson and den Boer.


Paragraph 13 Reports from the field are even more startling. A New York Times story earlier this year noted the following gender imbalance in the provincial city of Guiyang: 129 boys born for every 100 girls, and 147:100 for couples having second or third children.


Paragraph 16 It doesn't take a genius to see trouble down this road. Those "bare branches" who will never find brides are not just an emotional tragedy; they could also cause real problems for these two giant Asian societies. Experts start by predicting a rise in prostitution and the trafficking(2) of women. (2) Trafficking means illegal transportation or movement of  drugs, people,...or other countrabands in general.


17 Hudson and den Boer say the bare branches tend to be unskilled transients tempted by crime and substance abuse. They predict violence, rebellion, bachelor subcultures, and social disorder. They quote a Chinese official warning of "a great hoodlum army" of single men.


Paragraphs 18 and 19 might get this place into trouble with the censors.


The Yeti, from 雨巷英语园地 :  http:/yeti.rainlane.com
 

I am also wondering why the word s-e-x is forbidden to locate on here! The s-e-x is just a substitution of gender.


The words all were red here; they made my eyes tired, I will go to rainlane to have a read.

 

I had seen an aryicle to explain the reason for the phenomenon of the masulinization of society some time ago.


The ratio of s_e_x was naturally unbalanced as the male more than the female, but girls were easier to survive than boys, then the balance between the two genders existed in before. However, in this era with advanced medical technoloy, the boy's mortality is downgrading, so the popularity of men grows faster than women.


I suppose the reason above is the main power driving the masulinization of the world society. But, the notion of the many Chinese that boys value above girl does make China's unbalance between two genders so overt.


Today, with coincidence, I just argue with my working-comrades about the problem of gender of children in families. To my astonishing, several ones comfirm the prejudice toward femine descendants as the eassy says"Raising a daughter is like watering a plant in another man's garden,". It is absolutely an insult. My companions and I are profoundly annoyed and cannot endeavor their nonsense, then the argument come to an unpleasant ending.


[此贴子已经被作者于2005-10-27 0:33:34编辑过]

 

I am quite annoyed by those color changes. Sometimes they are all blue, other times they are red. But it only happens to certain posts. I wonder why.
The Yeti, from 雨巷英语园地 :  http:/yeti.rainlane.com
 

25: 激情过后的冷静思考 Clear thinking needed after euphoria

Today's reading is from http://www.zaobao.com/bilingual/pages1/bilingual301103.html


For years, I have been recommending the www.zaobao.com site  to those  who have been looking for "bilingual" news related articles. This is the 新加坡 联合早报 website. It has bilingual articles as well as some very interesting English "lessons."


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The following article is written in Chinese by a Chinese student studying in Singapore, and expertly translated into English.  For people who have a eye on becoming a translator,  they should spend some time reading the many bilingual articles in zaobao.


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(For the complete article, in Chinese and English, go to: http://www.zaobao.com/bilingual/pages1/bilingual301103.html


激情过后的冷静思考——看神舟五号成功发射
Clear thinking needed after euphoria

白鹤By Bai He (2003-11-30)


Translated by Yap Gee Poh.


 China took a step forward in its space programme at 9am on Oct 15 when, with the entire nation watching, its first manned space flight Shenzhou V blasted into space. Every Chinese was elated and Jiuquan city in Gansu province, the closest place to the launch centre, became the focus of global attention.


  For any Chinese or Asian, the successful launch of Shenzhou V is doubtless a cause for jubilation. A developing Asian nation has become a space power and joined the elite club of nations that have sent man into space.

  Like thousands of overseas Chinese students, I was flushed with pride over this historic moment for China. But when the euphoria was over, the question that struck me was: What should we really be cheering about?


...skip several paragraphs.


While Chinese should rightfully be proud of Shenzhou V, they need to understand that it is development that is peaceful, forward-looking and unlimited that China should take pride in. The determination to continue China's space exploration should be motivated by the desire to make peaceful progress and not narrowed-minded nationalism.


....skip several paragraphs


The challenge for the Chinese is to be able to always hold their heads high, not just momentarily. This requires them to focus on practical, rather than symbolic significance as well as rational thinking.


(Since the Chinese source text is available on the zaobao site, I will not make connotations. If, for some reasons, that site is banned ( you cannot ban everyone forever just because of a word here and a word there, or that you don't agree with one particular sentence they say.) let me know.)


The Yeti, from 雨巷英语园地 :  http:/yeti.rainlane.com
 

I believe in the liberity of China, but I am bewildered by its behaviors about forbidden of ssome words sometimes.
 

26: More people are learning Chinese

Today's reading are paragraphs from the article " As China rises, many rush to get on the `Middle Kingdom'(1) bandwagon(2)"  by Tim Johnson of Knight Ridder Newspapers Source: http://www.realcities.com/mld/krwashington/news/world/13002947.htm

(1) "Middle Kingdom" (correct); "Middle Country"(Chinglish, incorrect)


(2) Bandwagon (check your dictionary) and see cartoon and explanation at: 第 93 楼 Item #71 http://www.rainlane.com/dispbbs.asp?boardid=27&id=6499&star=10#6499



JAKARTA, Indonesia - As students bustled in and out of her Mandarin language school, teacher Yue Xiaoyan said a desire to learn Chinese was awakening in the world. (3)


(3) Example:  The realization that the world is coming to end is slowly awakening in the minds of people on the doomed planet..



"More and more people are starting to realize that Chinese is a really, really important language," Yue said.


From Jakarta to Vancouver and on to New Delhi and Chicago, surging interest(4) in studying the Chinese language is just one gauge (5) of the greater magnetic pull (6) that China exerts after two decades of galloping economic growth (7). China is wielding more clout (8) around the globe, shaping up as a counterweight to (9) the United States in fields as divergent as(10) diplomacy, trade and language.


Examples: 4. After the recent run-up on oil prices, there is a surging interest in purchasing of small cars.


5.  Some people gauge their successes in terms of money.


6. The quality of life in America has a great magnetic pull on people in South America.


7. Galloping economic growth must be kept in check or it will run out of control.


8. People with money often wield more clout then those who have not.


9. The Supreme Court acts as a counterweight to the private interests of unscrupulous groups in the U.S.A.


10 The genius of Leonardo Da Vinci lied in his divergent knowledge of art, engineering and science.


(Please be considerate to the amount of time the poster has put in to assemble this series of reading material. 请勿转贴 .只贴两处:点点论坛及 雨巷英语角.  此贴是点点#36 Yeti: http://www.rainlane.com/dispbbs.asp?boardid=8&id=15724  雨巷英语角之 #47。)


China's negotiators are chalking up numerous free-trade accords with other countries, yanking the momentum from the United States, while Chinese leaders travel the globe to red-carpet welcomes from trading partners pulled by China's growth locomotive.


Economic vitality is at the heart of China's ascendancy, adding luster to a nation that was stagnant and impoverished only a generation ago. Now, China launches men into space, fields a modern military, finances some of the world's daring architecture and jostles for influence in the international market of ideas.


It still doesn't come close to challenging the United States in "soft power," that combination of cultural and economic vibrancy, marketing pizzazz, diplomatic heft and idealistic vision that made the last century one of American pre-eminence around the globe. But in odd and disparate corners, from the NBA courts, where Yao Ming dribbles and other players sport Chinese tattoos, to the Eiffel Tower illuminated in red to honor the Chinese New Year, the Middle Kingdom's influence is growing.


(skip several paragraphs)



China isn't seeking a confrontation with the United States, but it's jousting for influence in some of the far corners of the world. It's also leveraging its economic growth to kindle global enthusiasm for studying the standard Chinese dialect, which the majority of Chinese speak.


A subsidiary of the Education Ministry aims to set up 100 Chinese language institutes around the world, which it calls Confucius Institutes, and staff them with native Chinese teachers. The goal is to quadruple the number of foreigners studying Chinese to 100 million by 2010. So far it's set up 32 institutes in 23 countries.


...skip to the end.


(For the complete article, please go to http://www.realcities.com/mld/krwashington/news/world/13002947.htm )

The Yeti, from 雨巷英语园地 :  http:/yeti.rainlane.com
 

a question from my practrice: It is to be pursued.?= It is should to be pursued.
 

1.JAKARTA teacher Yue Xiaoyan said a desire to learn Chinese was awakening in the world.


awakening means stiking or gradually prevailing?


2.China is wielding more clout around the globe


wield more clout on= exercise great influence on    divergent=different


e.p. U.S.A has dominated the first list in fields as divergent as economy and military force, so it is wielding more clout on international affairs.


3.Chinese leaders travel the globe to red-carpet welcomes from trading partners pulled by China's growth locomotive.


"to" should be substitued by "with"?


Many inland areas in China are undertaking marvelous developing as following as coastland's growth locomotive.


4. jostles for influence  =endeavor to have a efficient affect on


5.economic vitality


China has displayed its great vitality at divergent fields such as heavy, light and service industry.


6.kindle=ignite


My enthusiasim of becoming to a dancer is kindled by Lihua's perfect dancing performance.


?Just now, I found a puzzle on the means of "be lied on sth.".lied? But I cannot find its location now.

 

以下是引用楞次雨在2005-11-3 0:57:00的发言:
a question from my practrice: It is to be pursued.?= It is should to be pursued.

It is to be pursed is stronger than it should be pursued, but just slightly so.

The Yeti, from 雨巷英语园地 :  http:/yeti.rainlane.com
 

3.Chinese leaders travel the globe to red-carpet welcomes from trading partners pulled by China's growth locomotive.


"to" should be substitued by "with"?  "To" is correct. You cannot use "with."  "Red-carpet welcomes" : welcomes "noun, plural", not verb. When an important person arrives, a red carpet is rolled out for him/her to step on. That is called a "red-carpet treatment/welcome."  You  travel to a red-carpet welcome=You travel to a place where you are treated with a "red-carpet welcome."

4. jostles for influence  => jostle=push or shove at each other to get a better position. Jostles for influence=competiting with others vigorously to get into a position where you can influence others the most.
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ok, I see