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烦请各位高手帮我批改一下作文,小妹这厢有礼了!多谢

烦请各位高手帮我批改一下作文,小妹这厢有礼了!多谢


                                  waste





                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Just as the increasingly development of soscial




property is incredible,waste has virtually circled


the globe.Even waste has exerted tremendous importance  on most people .Though the phenomenon has never been extincted.


    It is not exaggrated that the infruence of waste is great ,to common people ,which should not be ignored.On the  first place


some scientists say that ,to an extend ,custom can be reflected,wheather bad or good,by the customs' behaviors,one of


which is waste.On the second plce ,if no waste,more people will


be raised,mainly more plants and animals reserved.And finally,although our social property is  fruitful ,waste is the obstract of


improved development.


    So we should behavior ourselves and single out sevarel solutions.Intense of the cconcept that waste is not innevitable,in my opinion,is feasible .And also,regarding myself ,for an instance,how


much can I eat just rely on my gastro.


    No pains, no gains.And waste can not be forgived .What I maintain


is that we will spair no effort to put out waste in the days ahead.


[此贴子已经被作者于2004-5-10 18:39:10编辑过]

 

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