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今天早上起床后，朋友要我陪她去花店，预订婚礼布置的东西。一进门，我们眼睛都花了，眼前都是大型的布置道具，确实很漂亮，让我觉得现在结婚也够繁琐的。现在结婚真是不简单，除了传统繁琐的礼节外，年轻人越来越讲究排场，家里布置也是必备的项目了，不要说酒店的了。看着叠叠的照片，我倒有点不耐烦，却突然想起老丁的一句话：中国人喜欢加法模式，外国人喜欢减法模式。人，还是生活简单的好，不停地往生活上加添繁琐的点缀，只会不停地加重负担，身心疲累。
我不喜欢回老家，就是因为这里的世界很少又很世俗，让人觉得好不舒服，加上小地方，人的素质还是停留在暴发户的层面上，受不了。回家半个月了，很想走，呆不住了，我还是喜欢一个人的生活。也许一个人的时候就会比较宁静，心里会舒服点，又也许我的心理素质还不够高，不能把控自己，轻松地面对一切。

Get up this morning, my friend asked me to flower shop whit her, ordering wedding layout of things. A door, we have spent eyes, the eyes are large layout props, is indeed very beautiful, so I think that marriage has enough red tape. Now marriage is not simple, in addition to the traditional cumbersome courtesy, young people increasingly pay attention ostentation and home layout of the project is essential, not a hotel. Seeing piles of photos, I have a little impatient, suddenly reminded of Laoding the sentence: Chinese people like addition, foreigners like subtraction, Or the simple life, and constantly add red tape to the embellishment of life, will continuously increase the burden.
    I do not like back home, because here the very few secular world, people feel not comfortable, coupled with small place, people's quality remain in the upstart level, I can not stand. I were at home in half pass a month, would like to go, can not stay, I still prefer a person's life. Perhaps a person's time will be relatively quiet, comfortable minds will be, and perhaps I also psychological quality is not high enough, can not control themselves, easily the face of all.

"Get up this morning, my friend asked me to flower shop whit her, ordering wedding layout of things. A door, we have spent eyes, the eyes are large layout props, is indeed very beautiful, so I think that marriage has enough red tape. "的修改如下

get ? 是不是应该为"getting?"
my friend asked me to flower shop whit her,中的whit是不是应该为"with?"  flower是不是应该为"flowers"
A door是不是应该为"get into the door ?"
we have spent eyes, the eyes are large layout props这句应换句话替代一下.

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Re: Get/Getting
You can use either "Got" or "Getting". Writing a diary is different from writing a composition.  Sentence fragments that are not allowed in compostions are allowed in writing diaries. Most diaries are written in note form. E.g. Got up this morning.  Had a simple breakfast.  Fought morning traffic to get to work on time.

Use "getting" when you use a participle phrase:
(i) Note form: Got up this morning. My friend asked me to go shopping for flowers with her.
(ii) "Getting": After getting up this morning, I was asked by my friend to go flower shopping with her.

Your work requires extensive revision. I will come back later when I have more time.

Excuse me for being frank. If you want to learn English properly, especially written English, learn it through the proper channel. Never, never, and I repeat, never, try learning it through the use of a translation software. That never works.

Let me quickly show you what you did wrong in the first few sentences.

Get up this morning, my friend asked me to flower shop whit her, ordering wedding layout of things.->After getting up this morning, I was asked by my friend to go flower shopping with her, and to order the decorations for her wedding./After getting up this morning, I was asked by my friend to go to a flower shop with her to order decorations for her wedding.
Why "I was asked" and not "My friend asked..."?  The modifier "After getting up this morning" is about "I", and not about my friend.

A door (i), we have spent eyes (ii), the eyes are large layout props (iii)(iv), is (v) indeed very beautiful, so I think that marriage has enough red tape. (vi)

(i) A door =/=一进门. A door=一扇门

(ii) spent= to use or put out as in "we spent a lot of money yesterday."; "we spent an hour doing that."

(iii) "the eyes are large layout props" (No, your eyes are not layout props.) (The eyes are large layout props=我们眼睛都是大型的 prop." (iv) "Prop" is for stage, theatre or movie setups (see also #Vii).

(v) No subject for the verb "is".

(vi) Red tape=煩瑣的公事,繁文縟節. E.g. Our water purification project proposal is bound up in red tape at the provincial government level. I don't know when it will ever be approved.

(vii) You are talking about going to a flower shop (陪她去花店). So it is flower decorations you are talking about. "Prop" is not the correct word.

一进门，我们眼睛都花了，眼前都是大型的布置道具，确实很漂亮，让我觉得现在结婚也够繁琐的。(Once through the door)/(Once inside the store), we were all bedazzled. Everything in front of our eyes were large flower arrangements. They were indeed beautiful, but that also made me feel today's weddenings have lots of details to attend to.
OR
Once through the door, we were all bedazzled by the truly beautiful large flower arrangements. They made me feel that today's weddings are (miredi)/(often tied up)  in details.

Here is a candid message from me:
  One must learn to walk before learning to run.  You are not ready to write a composition yet.  You should concentrate on doing lots and lots of reading--so as to get into your head how English sentences are like. Next, you should try writing single sentences, and lots of them, in proper English. Think of how children learn their native tongue: listen, speak and read first. Writing comes last.  Sorry to have to give you a bitter pill to swallow, but swallow you must, or you will get nowhere.
  Keeping a dairy is a very good way to practice writing; however,  don't be too ambitious to start with. Try writing short entries in a few simple sentences first. Only when you have mastered the basic writing skill should you attempt to write something more complicated such as this.
    Let me repeat: read, read and read. The only way to learn how to write properly is to read, read and read. Leave me a message in my diandian mailbox if you need more info.

呵呵，继续努力

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