Today's  society  is  bombarded  with  various  version  of  achievement.  But  who knows  the  hypercrisis  under the truth ?  This  picture  depicts  the  trend  vividly .  The  man  is  engaged  in  copying  someone's  paper  without  being  conscious  that  the  social  pressure  is approaching  .He may be  a  famous  learner  who  win  others' love  and  respect ,yet plagiarizing  results  in  notoriety.  If  he  did so, it  means  he  is  ignorance  of  the  connation  of  "his  paper", which will  extend  the  comtempt  of  others'  to him.  That  the  reputation  and  precious  things  he  once  poccessed  turned  into  pieces that  can  not  piece  together .Didn't  he know  that"give  a dog  a bad  name  and  hang  him ?"    In  disregard  of  individual , this  flow  will  corrupt  our  nation ，threaten  the  development  of our  society  and  even  weaken  the passion  of  conducting  a reaserch  . The most dreadful  thing  is that  the  world where  we live  will  become a container  that  is full  of  unknowlegable  but win high profile carrer elements.
    Mercifully,  we  still  have  opportunity  to chang it  that  is not  rooted  in culture  .Don't let unsufficient-clever  professors become a fool. Don't  let  it  contanmine  our  purist scientific  field.
第一次发贴，请各位高手帮忙批改，谢谢了。。

learner  who  win  others' /who是这位learner吗？win?

Before I attempt to correct this, I need to know what you mean by:
-the  hypercrisis  under the truth ? 
-without  being  conscious  that  the  social  pressure  is approaching .
-plagiarizing  results  in  notoriety. 
-he  is  ignorance  of  the  connation  of  "his  paper"
-Didn't  he know  that"give  a dog  a bad  name  and  hang  him ?"   
-In  disregard  of  individual , this  flow  will  corrupt  our  nation ，
-container  that  is full  of  unknowlegable  but win high profile carrer elements.
-to chang it  that  is not  rooted  in culture 
-Don't let unsufficient-clever  professors become a fool.
-contanmine  our  purist scientific  field.

今后加油啊！

很Before I attempt to correct this, I need to know what you mean by:
-the  hypercrisis  under the truth ? 
-without  being  conscious  that  the  social  pressure  is approaching .
-plagiarizing  results  in  notoriety. 
-he  is  ignorance  of  the  connation  of  "his  paper"
-Didn't  he know  that"give  a dog  a bad  name  and  hang  him ?"   
-In  disregard  of  individual , this  flow  will  corrupt  our  nation ，
-container  that  is full  of  unknowlegable  but win high profile carrer elements.
-to chang it  that  is not  rooted  in culture 
-Don't let unsufficient-clever  professors become a fool.
-contanmine  our  purist scientific  field. 抱歉，我的作文水平实在不怎么样，请问这些都是什么错误，我把它们弄成让人看不懂的英文了吧，呵呵，请帮忙指出。。。

谢谢各位高手，我会继续努力。。。

who  指leaner , 我想表达的意思是，他或许是一个赢得他人的爱及尊重的著名学者。

那么win是否要加s呢，呵呵

请帮忙指出。。。  I can't do that until you tell me what they mean. Why don't you write them out in Chinese so I can have an idea what they are all about.  I know some people can figure them out because they read and write English as Chinese, but I can't.