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徐州四级视屏班赵兴炜作文专帖

徐州四级视屏班赵兴炜作文专帖

It pays to be honest
In the now day, the dishonest phenomenon are increasing. Trader could cheat customer for profit. The benefit form cheating draws more people to join the community of cheater. Across the nation, dishonest event be occurred every where.
In an effort to deal with the unhealthy phenomenon, honesty becomes more and more important. Honesty can be defined as no cheat, treating somebody in heart. Our society needs this kind of people. People can be benefit honesty. Take an example with me. Once time, I pick up 100yuan. Even though nobody saw it, I hand it to teacher. In the end of this term, I was considered as honest student and my parents were pride of me. It is more important than 100yuan only. In the other side, dishonesty could lead you to lose a lot. For instance, once a trader was fond that he is a cheater, nobody could buy his goods. His whole life could become back.
So, be honest. It pays to be honest.
  赵兴炜
赵兴炜
 

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the dishonest phenomenon are increasing/the dishonest phenomena are increasing
dishonest event be occurred every where/dishonest events occurred everywhere
Take an example with me/Take me as an example
Once time??
I pick up 100yuan指的应该是过去吧,动词用过去时
 

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谢谢各位高手帮忙改改,我这是第一次上传,谢谢了
赵兴炜
 

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谢谢,这么快就帮我改好了,太令我感动了,我一定会多写的,虽然这只是第一次.
赵兴炜
 

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What  causes  a  boom  in  celebrating foreign  festivals
In a nowy day ,celebrating foreign festivals become boom .why ?it means what ?
In my perspective ,the reasons that celebeting foreign festivals are not only one .Differet people have different idea .But a reason is difenitely .celebrating forreign festival beacome a populate things.
But I do not thought that celebrating foreign  festivals is good things.our country already has a host of festivals.why should we celebrating other countrys’ festivals?i can’t understend.
赵兴炜
 

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difenitely  /  definite

如果不确定单词有没有写错,建议先在microsoft office 中的word里写文章,它会自动帮你检查单词拼写的,如果写错了,会有一条红色波浪线在写错的单词下面。
Rome was not built in one day. Nor was learning english well.
 

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我是用WORD写的,但是那个WORD是盗版的,不能找错
赵兴炜
 

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the housing problem
In the daily time ,with the development of the economic ,personer’s wages are increasing .As a resaut ,the rich man want to buy house, which case some problems.
Some business people fond the business opptunity in the phenomenon. They bought a lot of houses, when someone need house, they cought sell the house with high priese. plus, a new tide of soaring building price is becoming increasingly popular in china. Someone want to buy a comfortebale room to live is not easy things.
赵兴炜
 

回复 7F zxw15895210902 的帖子

到网上重新下吧,现在没多少正版的,不过都能找错,也难得有盗版的不能找错了、、、、
 

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又写完一篇了,又要辛苦各位高手了,这是我中午赶出来的,质量不高,请各位高手耐心的看完,小弟我感激不尽啊~这里面的错别字可能比较多,我这里实在没有可以找错的正版WORD啊!如果可能的话,帮我改两个错词,我就心满意足了,在次表示对各位高手的感谢。各位辛苦了。
赵兴炜
 

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这不是我的电脑,我是借别人的打的
赵兴炜
 
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