回复: 安阳四级浅浅作文专帖
Everyone is eager
to success. Take me as an example.
I have long desired to come to the top since I was in short pants. Today
as a university student, I
am still dying to gain success
/I still have a strong eagerness for success. In my eyes, there is a wealth of ways to
meet with success. But the most important thing is
persistence and industry. If you can
last long in your job and be diligent
about your studies you will
make your own way. As
the modern society develops
/grows rapidly, competition is becoming increasingly. So we must put study on
the top of
our agenda, and
keep up/steps with the times/
advance with the times. We must consistently arm ourselves with new knowledge and skills,
then the success is near us/a little away off us.
我们很可能是校友哦，我应该是学姐啦！你的作文基本功有点弱，建议多读多背点文章，我的水平也不高，很希望能够多交流一下，所以恨不好意思的给你改喽，如果有改的不好的地方你不要笑我哦!最好请高手再帮忙改一下！
