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南京六级班sharylin作文专贴

南京六级班sharylin作文专贴

南京六级面授班                               
                                How to make friends
              1,朋友对任何人都很重要
              2,我认为怎样交朋友

                        how to make friends
    Friends matter much on our life path.They take a extremely important in our daily life.LuXun said it's enough to have a good friend in our life.A leading case is that friends  will give a hand when we tap in trouble and they also will happy for us when we achieve huge success.We can get a better understanding between each other.


    In my eyes,we should have a correct attidute to friendship.To start with,we should express our heartfelt tension for them to make a friend.Not only think up them when we need help,but also share happiness with them. In the second place,we can get endless joyful when we try to concern about them.It's a good chance for us to learn how to communicate with them.Finally,friends will become a good memory when we grow older and older.They still shake our hands,keep company with us and recall the good old days.



文中同色的词希望能找到合适的替换,作文中有很多地方写的不够地道,请同学老师指教,谢谢。
 

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They take a extremely important in our daily life / They take a extremely important role in our daily life
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