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Thanks to the development of the manufacturing and the import and export trade, an increasing number of private automobiles have found their way into most cities of our country. They have a huge number of
significant impacts on our daily life. However, these years have witnessed the traffic problem-traffic jam which has become a big issue in big cities. Taking a look at the main streets at the rush hours in the morning and afternoon, the traffic problem is more serious.
There are several related reasons for traffic issues. To start with the life and work aspects, a lot of folks prefer to work in center of the city while live in urban. The need of convenient transportation means result in the number jump of private cars. In the second place, the commercial and chief vehicles coming from other parts of the areas aggravate the traffic problem. The last but not the least, tourism and leisure vehicles are more and more in big city which also play an important role in the increasing of traffic problem near the shopping center or tourist attractions.
Simply put, on one hand, the strict transport rules should be developed in couple years ahead. On the other hand, more and more public transports such as bus should be applied in most big cities which can be a significant measure to release the traffic problem.

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To start with the life and work aspects, a lot of folks prefer to work in the center of the city and live in urban, which demanding convenient transportation means which result in the number jump of private cars.\To start with the life and work aspects, a lot of folks prefer to work in the center of the city while live in urban.The need of the convenient transportation means result in the number jumping of private cars.
in increasing the traffic problem near the shopping center or tourist attractions. \in the increasing traffic problem near the shopping center or tourist attractions.

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Thanks to the development of the science and technology, we are well into an entirely new age-the digital age. An increasing number of the digital products have found their way into our daily life. They have a huge impact on us. These commodities, to name only a few, involve digital cameras, MP3 players, mobile phones and computers and so on.

Taking a look at these items, we can find that these digital products have produced far-reaching impact on us. To start with, in our work, computers of various kinds are something that used to set the operated relationship with other companies. In the second place, in our study, there is sharply climbing of digital commodities which help us on our way to success. We often download video and audio learning materials into my MP3 player. The last but not the least, in average folks’ daily life, digital stuffs are increasingly employed. For example, almost everyone in our class have a cell phone which can help us get in touch with others.
Simply put, these digital products of the digitized era are significant to our human beings.

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