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[It pays to be honest
There are varieties of dishonest phenomenon in the modern society
, People often tell lies in the phone call, in the email, face to face and so on, students often tell lies to teachers, children often tell lies to their patents and
some husband tell lies to their wife .However,
it is worth our attention that people don’t cognizant that dishonest is a bad habit??, they still tell lies for fame and power.(思路太简单了,又全是简单句)
From my perspective,
honest is good for others and ourselves,
if you are honest to others and they also take honest to you(主句是什么?).
Honest gives us a deep insight into beautiful soul world.
We should put
honest in our heart, because it is beneficial. When we enjoy honest, we also enjoy beautiful world!
LZ要好好加强啊,语法和单词词性问题较多,有篇分数比较低的作文和LZ很象,在考试前争取改之
