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Care for the elderly
Thanks to advances in economic and medicine, there are an increasing number of the elderly around us. And our mother land is well into a senile society. In this society, most elders are token good care by their families. But some are lonely, who live in the seniors’ home.
As a college student such as me, we are supposed to give our hands to them. Let them feel comfortable and enjoy their life. For instance, we should take good care of them ,help them do some simple housework ,such as washing the clothes , cleaning the house ,and do the cooking for them .Through these daily things ,in my opinion, their hearts will be filled with sweets and happiness. They will not fell lonely any more. Actually, we would like to respect the elders not only in material, but also in spiritual. What we could not ignore is to company with them .We can chat to them sitting at their knees, listening to their history stories and their experiences.
As is known to all, care for the elderly is our country’s traditional virtue .Being a college student, it is our inescapable duty to develop this virtue. We would like to respect the elders and take good care of them.

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How to Make Friend?
Friend matter much on our life pacth. They are intensely important to all of us .Everybody needs friends,they could bring simling and sunshine to our life;without them ,our life will turn into darkness.
A sincere friend could be beneficial to find out your faults.They can give you a host of valuable suggestion . Let you grow into a flawless man . What is more ,friend is regarded as the people who give your hands at the first time when you are in trouble . They will help you trying their best without any returns .No one can take the place of friends in our life .
Maybe someone want to ask how to make friends ,in my eyes ,the extremely important things are respect and sincerity .Only you respect others and treat them sincerely ,you will become others' friend.Meanwhile ,friends need to believe each other. Telling lie is harmfull to your friendship . As a friend ,you are supposed to care for your friends and put them in primary place .You can go out for a play with your friends .If you can not stay togther ,you may send messages to them to express yout missing . In a word ,if you respect,believe and care for your friends sincerely, your friendship will become stable in long term.

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又写了篇，请大家帮忙修改一下，给点意见，谢谢！！
How to make friends?
There is no agreement among people on the issue that friends matter much on our daily life path. For the simple reason is that friends is playing a crucial role. For instance, when you alone or not happy, you can find your friends. when you are in trouble, they will dedicate to offering help and without expecting anything.
Through the analysis above, it is obvious that friends contribute favorably to the improvement of people’s living standards. But how to make friends? sometimes the same educational background lets some people get together .They become good friends. However, in my opinion ,whether we can make truly friends or not depends to a large extend on whether we can express our sincerely and help others warm hearted. When we are touching with others, we should pay respect to people. when they are getting in trouble, we can give a hand to him.
Make good friends have a positive impact on the individuals as well as on the society. It has an favorable impact on people’s psychological.

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friends is playing a crucial role/ friends are ....
they will dedicate to offering help and without expecting anything/ they will dedicate to offering help and do not expect any reward

in my opinion / in my eyes

Make good friends have a positive impact on / Making good friends has ....

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