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四级视频班daienya作文专帖

四级视频班daienya作文专帖

Dear friend:

I got to know you were accepted into the university when I receive you letter. I must congratulate you on a successful acceptance. And, I heard it is a top and famous university across the nation. You are very lucky.


However, the life of university is different from middle school. The college students are not rely their parents. They have themselves impression when they do anything. The college students enjoy more freedom to learn what appeal to them, but the middle school students couldn’t. Students couldn’t on a tight schedule learning in the university, they can put their free time in anything which they like. But, the college students have pressure more than middle school students because they face a career problem.


In my eyes, learning is important, but playing is also important. Because of we only have one chance to living in the university. So the best way is to combine them, our life will be better in the university, it will become glorious memory for us in the days ahead.



帮忙改改,谢谢了!
 

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The college students are not rely their parents/The college students do not rely on their parents
 

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I heard it is /  I heard it was  注意时态一致
Rome was not built in one day. Nor was learning english well.
 

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Because of we only have one chance to living in the university.
四六级、考研超精解和外刊超精读继续升级,保持领先~玩味尘世,静坐苍穹。
 

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四六级、考研超精解和外刊超精读继续升级,保持领先~玩味尘世,静坐苍穹。
 

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这句话的意思是:因为我们一生中只有一次大学生活

谢谢您们的修改
 

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On Success
    Everyone is longing for success. As college students in modern age, we are bound to unexampled. There is a wealth of ways though the success, it depended on how you choose.
    Some people were under the impression that must study hard and acquire enough knowledge, and then can achieve success whatever does anything. But other people considered this is not enough, we must have resolution and patience in addition to the knowledge. Few people thought that gain success as this too hard, they want to do something simple and easily and believe if we have luck or some people help us then we will score success.
    In my eyes, I didn’t agree the third opinion. The way of success is tough. In an effort to win success, we must consistently effort and industry study. I convinced insistence and industry is the most important for taste success. 

请各位高手修改下,谢谢!
 

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It pays to be honest
    When it comes to honesty, a wealth of people shakes their head. It says that contain many dishonest phenomenon in this society, which contribute to lots of bad problems. So we should attach importance to honesty.
    For instance, now, some traders in an effort to earn more money, they turn out a host of fake and shoddy goods which doesn’t pay to customers. The fake and shoddy goods will hurt people’s health even life. If people ill, it will pose a presence to their lives and works and lead to many troubles. Once people sense it, they will don’t buy this good in future. If traders count as for long, it hurts to them, so makes good goods and honest for people is useful to them.
To sum up, everyone should be honest. It pays to be honest. Honesty can full you in heart and mentally. People will more friendly and harmonious in the days ahead. At last, our lives will be better.


请各位高手帮忙改改,谢谢啦1
 

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在社会上着接用 in society
 

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which contributes to
 
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