回复：南京六级面授班ZXH作文专帖（Traffic jam)
we can see lots of cars on the road move slowly/we can see lots of cars on the road moving slowly
注意句子的语法错误
traffic jam increasingly common currently / currently,traffic jams increasingly and commonly
you are likely to spend more time to the place/you are likely to spend more time in the place
We can see so many autos queue along the road waiting for the green light/We can see so many autos queuing up along the road to wait for the green light
There is a wealth of driving forces behind the trend/There are a wealth of driving forces behind the trend 单复数问题一定要注意啊，兄弟
For instance, society develop and economic rise sharply/For instance, as society develops and economy grows sharply 加一个as 使得上下句连贯，而且要注意词汇的搭配，老问题单复数，自己来数数错了几次，要是一次请我吃一顿，那我好几天不用自己掏腰包，哈哈（玩笑，下次注意，加油）
people are focus on efficiency/people are focusing their attention on efficiency
they want save time for work and business/they want to save time for work and business
There is little doubt about that / There is no doubt that
Went along with the price reduce of the private car / With price of the private car falling(lessening,going down,heading south)
more and more/increasing number of ,mounting ,rising
In my opinion/From my perspective
taking autobus/taking public transportation
