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常州四级视频班小星星作文专帖已更新至十九楼

A Letter to My Friend Xigua

Dear Xigua:
I'm very glad to hear the news that you have access to ZG College which you have intended to get in.Conguatulation,my girl.And now,what about your camp life?I hope it's better than high school life.
I have to say it's quite leisure in college by contrast of high school living. No longer the teachters and parents would stand around you. We enjoy ourselves by days and do everything what we attend to freely. In college,most of us go far from our families,so we must care about ourselves sheer independengly.Though we are treated as adults in high school,we always absorbe the care and love under our parents all the time.It seems that we like baby birds. I feel that we are out of stress strickly in senior school.
But if we consider it like this,we will be wrong.Because we are faced with fierce competition to living oueselves. we have to fight for self-importance .That means we need efforts forever.keep your eyes on the stare and your feet on the ground.The best way you can predict your future is to create it.Don't waste time and do what you deserve to do.And then keep a balance heart on all aspacts.In a sum,you are happy everyday.Never forget it .
Best wishes！

Yours
xingxing

It's much better to do myself than to resort to others!

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What a sunshine day! I enjoyed it in the whole day.But, there was something that made me unhappily.Originally, my friend and I intended to buy a bicycle that is second hand goods.We walked to the nearest bus station,then the bus took us to the derection and we walked a long way continuiously.But,the worst matter is that we didn't find the market !When we heard the news ,we would die."The market has been closed for a year. "That is the reason.Today,I almost wasted several hours,however,I knew the true and I would never make a mistake like this.

宝贝囡囡组别:新手上路性别: 生日:1900-1-1 来自: 积分:35 帖子:25 注册: 2008-05-01	2008-05-14 16:28 \| 只看楼主树型\| 收藏\| 小中大 5 回复：常州视频班小星星作文专帖 There is no fault in my composition.

公才组别:注册会员性别: 生日:1900-1-1 来自: 积分:70 帖子:58 注册: 2008-04-28	2008-05-14 18:20 \| 树型\| 收藏\| 小中大 6 回复：常州视频班小星星作文专帖 But,/however,/ but后面直接跟句子,不要加逗号 derection/direction true/truth 只看出三个!! 其他让高手来看吧!

南京小G 南京小G 组别:金牌会员性别: 生日:1987-4-27 来自:申城积分:1977 帖子:1575 注册: 2007-04-26	2008-05-14 18:49 \| 树型\| 收藏\| 小中大 7 回复：常州视频班小星星作文专帖 teachters everything what we attend to freely／定语从句？which absorbe oueselves. 第一篇，斑竹较忙请谅解

宝贝囡囡组别:新手上路性别: 生日:1900-1-1 来自: 积分:35 帖子:25 注册: 2008-05-01	2008-05-15 22:38 \| 只看楼主树型\| 收藏\| 小中大 8 回复：常州视频班小星星作文专帖 Thanks a lot !You're so kind hearted.Thank you.

极度深蓝组别:新手上路性别: 生日:1900-1-1 来自: 积分:48 帖子:26 注册: 2008-02-22	2008-05-15 23:54 \| 树型\| 收藏\| 小中大 9 回复：常州视频班小星星作文专帖你刚才乱发了一个专帖，要被版主删除的。专帖就是把所有作文都发在一个帖子里。

宝贝囡囡组别:新手上路性别: 生日:1900-1-1 来自: 积分:35 帖子:25 注册: 2008-05-01	2008-05-17 09:24 \| 只看楼主树型\| 收藏\| 小中大 10 回复：常州视频班小星星作文专帖 Oh，my god！I’m sorry.

宝贝囡囡组别:新手上路性别: 生日:1900-1-1 来自: 积分:35 帖子:25 注册: 2008-05-01	2008-05-17 09:36 \| 只看楼主树型\| 收藏\| 小中大 11 回复：常州视频班小星星作文专帖 Oh，my god！I’m sorry.

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On Success

Every of us is longing for being successful. As a modern college student, I’m contained as well. There are many ways to be on success.
Consider being a successful person, for instance, coming across a good opportunity, seeking out some businesses which are sure to get profits, and taking the charge of your parents’ wealth that you have been inherited well.
But my view on success is to persist and work hard. These are major concern to achieve success. What is good to us, we should strike to it in everyday. Never give up and be lazy, or the result will be quite bad. We must make the best efforts to do everything well. In the end, you’ll succeed.

Happy everyday.

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On Success
Every of us is longing for being successful. As a modern college student, I’m contained as well. There are many ways to be on success.
Consider being a successful person, for instance, coming across a good opportunity, seeking out some businesses which are sure to get profits, and taking the charge of your parents’ wealth that you have been inherited well.
But my view on success is to persist and work hard. These are major concern to achieve success. What is good to us, we should strike to it in everyday. Never give up and be lazy, or the result will be quite bad. We must make the best efforts to do everything well. In the end, you’ll succeed.

pig丽组别:版主性别: 生日:1900-1-1 来自:南京积分:2062 帖子:1329 注册: 2005-04-01	2008-05-19 13:59 \| 树型\| 收藏\| 小中大 14 回复：常州视频班小星星作文专帖请看十二楼的更新 Consider being a successful person, for instance, coming across a good opportunity, seeking out some businesses which are sure to get profits, and taking the charge of your parents’ wealth that you have been inherited well这句话的主干是什么？

宝贝囡囡组别:新手上路性别: 生日:1900-1-1 来自: 积分:35 帖子:25 注册: 2008-05-01	2008-05-19 22:11 \| 只看楼主树型\| 收藏\| 小中大 15 回复：常州视频班小星星作文专帖请看十二楼的更新 "Consider being a successful person" I think,isn't it? Thank you very much，pig丽宝贝囡囡最后编辑于 2008-05-19 22:15:02

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应该加一句主题句“There are many factors contributing to succeed”在前面。

On Success

Every of us is longing for being successful. As a modern college student, I’m contained as well. There are many ways to be on success.

There are many factors contributing to succeed. Consider being a successful person, for instance, coming across a good opportunity, seeking out some businesses which are sure to get profits, and taking the charge of your parents’ wealth that you have been inherited well.

But my view on success is to persist and work hard. These are major concern to achieve success. What is good to us, we should strike to it in everyday. Never give up and be lazy, or the result will be quite bad. We must make the best efforts to do everything well. In the end, you’ll succeed.

宝贝囡囡最后编辑于 2008-05-20 09:55:52

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It pays to be honest

In modern times, there is a phenomenon existing that is dishonesty. As we all know, this isn’t moral and disadvantageous social development. If someone tell a lie, he will be tough to be trusted by others. However, those who are honest will be accepted easilier.

The person is honest , thus, he would have so many friends. Not only is it good to himself, but it also good to others. Therefore, we need honesty to treat to each other.

To be honest, it will take place unexpected matters around you. You’ll find the person always smile to you when they see you and help you positively when you are in trouble. They think you are worth of believing, so they support you from the bottom of their hearts. It pays to be honest.

Diligence and Persistance

宝贝囡囡最后编辑于 2008-05-28 17:02:37

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Oh，I'll never say die,never let my contury down,and never let my parents down. But the most important thing is never let myself down! So, I will do it. I must do it. I can do it. I just do it. Let's conquer English together. We should study it from the bottom of our hearts. I have set goals during my college life.Enjoying a meaning and happy time in college.And then, we can share memory in the days ahead.

Treasure everyday,you'll enjoy a happy life.

请各位亲爱的老师、朋友帮我看看的作文哦！感激不尽！Kiss to you.

宝贝囡囡最后编辑于 2008-05-27 16:55:10

一点点组别:管理员性别: 生日:1900-1-1 来自: 积分:5980 帖子:5564 注册: 2005-10-17	2008-05-27 17:09 \| 树型\| 收藏\| 小中大 20 回复：常州四级视频班小星星作文专帖已更新至十九楼 there is a performance exiting that is dishonest. / there is a phenomenon existing that is dishonesty 你支持点点，支持四六级、考研超精解，外刊超精读了吗？

宝贝囡囡组别:新手上路性别: 生日:1900-1-1 来自: 积分:35 帖子:25 注册: 2008-05-01	2008-05-28 17:00 \| 只看楼主树型\| 收藏\| 小中大 21 回复：常州四级视频班小星星作文专帖已更新至十九楼我要把自己写的作文修改一下再上传了。谢谢一点点大哥！

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In modern times, there is a phenomenon existing that is dishonesty./还有很多说法a phenomenon about honesty has been on people's lips/on tip of people's tongues/across this ancient land/ As we all know, this isn’t moral and disadvantageous social development. If someone tell a lie, he will be tough to be trusted by others. However, those who are honest will be accepted easilier.

The person is honest , thus, he would have so many friends./这个是虚拟语气吗？Had the person been honest, he would have...? Not only is it good to himself, but it also good to others. Therefore, we need honesty to treat to each other./Undoubtedly, the bulk of folks, if not all, are bound to be ...

To be honest, it will take place unexpected matters around you. You’ll find the person always smile to you when they see you and help you positively when you are in trouble/give a hand to you when you are bogged down in trouble. They think you are worth of believing, so they support you from the bottom of their hearts. It pays to be honest

宝贝囡囡组别:新手上路性别: 生日:1900-1-1 来自: 积分:35 帖子:25 注册: 2008-05-01	2008-05-30 18:40 \| 只看楼主树型\| 收藏\| 小中大 26 回复：常州四级视频班小星星作文专帖已更新至十九楼小G哥哥，虽然有很多种说法，在这中间也有很好的说法，但是我觉得太多对于我来说就变成了困惑了。我会想哪一种更好呢？不过好是要说辛苦了！么么么。

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