<p> 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Traffic congestion<br/>Due to the evolution of Society, we witnessed the increasing popularity of Automobile over the past couple of years. And there is an upward trend in the number of them across society. But it cause a host of problems, especially, Traffic congestion is the more important in urban china. In addition, they lead to Air pollution, green house, the associated risk of disease in the Respiratory system and so on.<br/>  These say attribute to the Traffic congestion .there are a wealth of driving forces behind the trend. To start with, folks can quickly arrive at the desired dress; if you free time is running out, you have to choose it in order to arrive in time. And when we have the same opinion, the question produce. In the second place, the develop of Economy request, people transform a great variety of products from here to there, in order to get more profit, businessmen firstly select the Convenience way. Finally, private car become a symbol of wealth and status. Luxury cars, for instance, BWS, Lincoln vehicle, thus the Automobile are heating up.<br/>  In my opinion, the vehicle bring advantage to us, but they attribute to kinds of problems, so Solute Traffic congestion, we cannot only limit the number of cars, but also fully use the subway and air resource. We cannot cancel them, after all, the cars is a necessary devil.<br/> 　第一次发帖，不妥之处请多多批评和指导，谢谢．</p><p></p>

 it cause a host of problems/causes?

And when we have the same opinion, the question produce/?

谢谢

Changes in the ownership of house
Due to the evolution of Society, we know, from the chart, the number of private houses is on the increasing. In contrary, state-owed houses straight decline from seventy five percent in 1995 to twenty percent in 2000.
There is a wealth of driving forces behind the trend. To start with, folks in a big city request a host of buildings largely because the population is rising. In the second place, the china became set free the ownership of houses. Currently, so people can choose building that they like. The last, but not the least, the developed of the economy is high-speed, so that real estate business is heating up.
  In my eyes, the changes have two sides. We can not have wide-light house and live comfortably without the shifts. However, the price of house is so hot that the citizens have to spend most savings for them buying a house. And also the effects are leading to a variety of problems such as an obvious poverty gap.
  这是2003六月的作文，第二次发表了，请各位高手抽点时间给改改，07.12作文才的50 分，十分可怜。伤心！！！先谢谢了。

Caring for the elderly
    Due to the evolutions of science and medical treatment, there is a largely upward trend in the number of senior citizens. So China is walking into an old - age society. And also it gives rise to a host of problems.
Currently, what we should do for them as colleague students.
To begin whit, we can make a harmonious conditions which get them feel comfortable and be in loved. In the second place, it is so important that provide kinds of food and fruits eating very early such as bananas to them, which is well for their heath. The last, but not the least important is accompanied by children. After retirement, the old folks feel lonely without anyone chat with them. Therefore, it is necessary to allow them walk out to talk with others the aged,
In my eyes, as for me, caring for the old is tralatitious morality in our country. Geriatric contribute into the whole community.
Consequently, they may relax and obtain care. Simply put, let us work hand in hand to do the social problems.
    今天又写了一篇,呵呵,希望丁老师和斑竹或着其他高手给给改改.
拜谢了。: